|Another Cheryl Creation|
|Cheryl's Sushi with no job. Pretty!|
|Cheryl's Sushi with job...Gross!|
|Like a modernist painting!|
|So clean. So neat. So plain.|
|Like a Van Gogh Painting.|
Of course, I could attempt to make sushi as well. It's not like it is impossible for me, But Cheryl does not like the way I do things. Her Sushi has to be "just so".
|So messy, So random, So chaotic|
|Feeling better about this dough|
|This dough is Rising on my list.|
|Time for taste testing.|
As for the Novel....240 pages 81,157 words total, out the door! I guess I added a few words during the editing process. There were far fewer problems with pacing or grammar than I had first thought. I'm quite pleased.
Over all opinion? Not to bad! Better than my early attempts at pizza anyway. Perhaps in the hands of a real editor, it could actually be really good. I doubt it will ever be required reading in some English Lit' class. They have to keep those things pretty "G" rated for all those college students, after all. Mine has all the bad stuff.....things every Parent or Born Again Christian hates: Drugs, Sex, Harsh Language, and Dragons!
|Monty Python and Spain....Loves Dungeons|
Seriously, why do Christians hate Dragons so? Ok maybe just us Lutherans.....( I should point out I deviate from the faith a little here...) I think Dragons are cool! We used to play Dungeons and Dragons and the S.O.P. for the W.E.L.S. was D&D was B.A.D! And I doubt it was because of the Dungeons.....(Hello.... Spanish Inquisition. We Christians LOVE dungeons!)
But no...Dragons = Devil somehow. Last time I checked, I have not been riding goats ( or dragons) towards the apocalypse. ( Ok, maybe in a video game....but not lately)
|But...Where is the Pepperoni?|
Other than that, I currently await Cheryl's arrival so I can begin a new masterpiece of Italian Culinary Artistry. This time I'll be able to put on more toppings and hopefully the crust will not end up like a cracker. Thin and Healthy Pizza Crusts traditionally suffered from a lack of flavor. If I can at least make it less like cardboard and more like ....pizza crust, Then I will consider this effort a success....even if it is minimal.